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Okay, I'm getting it together some... I'm okay with it if they stay loose and messy through this last little bit, but I thought maybe if I was getting lost it was time to try a little different approach, so I actually did thumbnail layouts for these last six pages (they'll get me to the end of this scene---just enough to set up the sticky conflict. ^_^;; ), plus I got two pages done today on top of said thumbnails, so I'm pretty happy...
21 needs work, especially on all those faces at different angles, but still...


And Trevor gets a shamelessly allegorical framing. (To make it even more shameless, this is Adrian's POV as he's percieving the energy from the whip, so it will probably be, like, glowing in the finished version.)
Only four pages to go!
21 needs work, especially on all those faces at different angles, but still...


And Trevor gets a shamelessly allegorical framing. (To make it even more shameless, this is Adrian's POV as he's percieving the energy from the whip, so it will probably be, like, glowing in the finished version.)
Only four pages to go!