[DRAFT] Natsume Yuujinchou fic: a cheap gag at Nyanko-sensei's expense

Okay, last post I mentioned I had another NY fic that I was letting rest, and that I had two complete versions of it. Well, after letting it rest awhile, I actually don't think either version is bad, and I could use a fresh pair of eyes to tell me "better one, better two?" I'm nervous as usual (with a bit of sympathy for comedians who never know if something works until they try it on other people), but that really seems to be the next step on this one, so if anyone doesn't mind a cheap gag at Nyanko-sensei's expense...

Two versions, each about 1000 words... ( under the cut )

This coming Sunday is also when I plan to start posting Seven Year Promise (I ended up dividing it further into four parts, and the plan is to post the first one Sunday and one per week after that).