*sparkles* Okay, I love how clearly Tanuma sees Natsume, despite not having most of the information. And the protectiveness competition between Madara and the Okina is kind of hysterical.
Thank you!! I'm glad that all came through. With Madara and the Okina, this fandom is great for a white-and-white morality conflict. ^__^ I kind of enjoyed calling Madara to task for his refusal to admit how nice he is, but of course he always shows his true colors in the end.
Part two is up now. I made myself post it before getting to your comment, actually, please excuse me. (Finally letting this thing out into the wild, I'm kind of freaking out. ^_^;)
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Date: 2013-03-01 08:52 pm (UTC)Part two is up now. I made myself post it before getting to your comment, actually, please excuse me. (Finally letting this thing out into the wild, I'm kind of freaking out. ^_^;)